Slave for a day
Slave for a day this is my edit for slave for a day.
This book is a part of the school journal series.
White hat:
Slave for day was written 2008 of November.
This book is also a short school play.
Black hat:
If I was to write this play I would add lines for Mrs Gibbs
and Natalie. I would also make it a little bit longer.
Green hat:
Made the book a little bit longer and change some of
the names to the characters like Jevees how in the world
do you pronounce that?
the names to the characters like Jevees how in the world
do you pronounce that?
Yellow hat:
Changing some of the characters names would be
helpful for the little kids and some seniors to pronounce
some of the names like Jevees that is an advanced name to pronounce.
helpful for the little kids and some seniors to pronounce
some of the names like Jevees that is an advanced name to pronounce.
Blue hat:
????
Red hat:
I feel very happy reading a book like this. It is a
familiar genre to read.
familiar genre to read.
Kia Ora Taylor. It's Hannah here from your Reading group and T4! Was this play your favourite? I like how you have added what you would change. I also like how you have added when it was wrote. Anyways Keep up the great work Taylor.
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