The girl that cried chicken
Once upon a time there was a little girl and her name was GongGong.
One day she went for a walk up the mountain as he got near the top of the mountain there
was a small cottage. It wasn’t an ordinary cottage it was a haunted cottage. GongGong was a
brave girl she went into the cottage there were cupboards dripping blood out of the gaps. She smelled a human now GongGong was really scared… CHICKEN!!! she cried while
being chased by the killer chicken. She ran back to the little town still being chased by the
chicken of DOOM she lives in townsville and she was still screaming CHICKEN CHICKEN
KILLER CHICKEN!!! And the people thought he was just playing but she wasn’t. The killer
chicken got into town scared all the people and captured them in his sack of TERROR!!! So the
chicken ate the people that thought GongGong was just playing for dinner then he ate GongGong
for supper.
One day she went for a walk up the mountain as he got near the top of the mountain there
was a small cottage. It wasn’t an ordinary cottage it was a haunted cottage. GongGong was a
brave girl she went into the cottage there were cupboards dripping blood out of the gaps. She smelled a human now GongGong was really scared… CHICKEN!!! she cried while
being chased by the killer chicken. She ran back to the little town still being chased by the
chicken of DOOM she lives in townsville and she was still screaming CHICKEN CHICKEN
KILLER CHICKEN!!! And the people thought he was just playing but she wasn’t. The killer
chicken got into town scared all the people and captured them in his sack of TERROR!!! So the
chicken ate the people that thought GongGong was just playing for dinner then he ate GongGong
for supper.
And they lived happily ever after
The end
Hey Taylor, Its great to see you taking charge of your blog and posting things independently! Good on you. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHello Taylor, I'm Maia, from Kaingaroa school up in the Far North, I'm a year 6. Perhaps you could add some more punctuation and maybe get a friend to check your spelling, also describe the chicken and the girl better but over all I really liked the thrill of the story. Also a question, did you get this idea for the story from the Boy who cried wolf??
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