Thursday 28 March 2019

Brunner Mine poem

here is my Brunner mine poem

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  1. Unknown2 April 2019 at 08:27

    Hi Taylor, I love the use of onomatopoeia "Kaboom" in your poem! Good on you for creating a poster and an audio. Well done, Taylor. Keep up the good work.

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    1. Unknown11 May 2019 at 12:14

      kia ora mihi pakauroharoha, Hello Mrs Gully
      Thanks for being kind and positive about my work. This poem took about 2 weeks to write it didn't come out as well as I thought it would but it still worked so I went with it. I used onomatopoeia and rhyme 1. because it was simple and easy.
      Thank you for your positivity

      Taylor

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