Thursday 21 November 2019

Writing



This term for writing we got given a slide to complete and the first activity I chose was the poem slide there are many more to do but this is my first activity.

-I hope you enjoy my rhyming poem:)

4 comments:

  1. Hi Taylor it is latoia here I really like your poem and how much it rhymes and maybe next time say how you did it enjoy your day. bye

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  2. Kia Ora Taylor
    Love your poem I love the way you set out your poem
    Next time you could the font. Cant wait to see the rest of your writing activity.

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  3. Hi Taylor it's Jorja here from Tortora 3 I really loved your poem. You have put in a lot of effet can't wait to see more of your poems maybe next time you could tell us how you came up with the poem but apart from that great work and KEEP IT UP
    Your friend Jorja
    GO TAYLOR

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  4. Hi Taylor,

    My name is bianca and i am a year 8 student from glenbrae school. I really loved your poem. cant wait to see more of your lovely poems in the future. Keep blogging

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.